Sunday, August 2, 2020

Writing True Short Stories



Here is a link to an informative article on writing true short stories: http://www.writerstreasure.com/writing-powerful-true-short-stories/ When writing a true short story, the art of it is to get the reader to feel the emotions you do about the subject. Below is one I wrote about an amazing little dog who had captured our hearts.


Poncho
by Teri Saya

 

Born a purebred short legged Jack Russell Terrier (JRT), Poncho was a handsome and complex dog. He was the essence of life in a small package. He indelibly touched our hearts….This is his story.

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A pair of young college students bought the puppy from a breeder and took him home to their small apartment. The initial excitement of having a cute, energetic puppy around wore off after a few months. Poncho was left alone in the apartment most of the time while his owners went to work and college. Out of loneliness, fear, and frustration, Poncho failed to be housebroken and began shredding everything he could get his teeth into. On the rare occasions that he came into contact with other dogs, he was aggressive, especially towards the smaller breeds. He was crated, and finally returned to the breeder when the students realized they had no time or patience for him. By this time, he was a year old, fearful, hesitant, and depressed. The sparkle in his soft brown eyes had dulled.

Art Sanchez, a Vietnam Veteran, was looking for a small companion dog at the suggestion of a friend who had acquired a sweet, little female JRT and had found out that her little brother was now available. He contacted the breeders, and they e-mailed him a photo of Poncho. Art recognized the lost, lonely look in this dog’s eyes. He had endured those very same feelings after returning from Vietnam three decades earlier. He arranged to pick Poncho up four days later.

It was mid-afternoon when Art arrived at the breeder’s estate. It was a big place, with outdoor runs, lots of toys and healthy, happy looking Jack Russell Terriers running every which way. The breeder was a large, jolly woman who gave Art the full tour of her estate while talking exuberantly about the advantages of owning a JRT. Poncho had been sequestered to his own area and was curled up on a little bed in the corner. Art got down on one knee and gently began calling his name, coaxing him out with a cookie. Poncho hesitantly came out of his corner, took the cookie, laid it down, and then licked Art’s hand.

By the time Art had made the transaction with the breeder the sunny weather had turned grey. It was a four hour drive home. The wind and rain buffeted the small truck while Poncho, wrapped in a blanket, shivered and pushed his nose further into Art’s down jacket. It was dark and still raining hard when they arrived at their destination, a large house on the coast surrounded by redwoods. That night Poncho would not eat and would not sleep in the new doggie bed, but burrowed under the covers and slept in his new owner’s bed. He was frightened of the storm and wasn’t about to be left alone again.

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The next morning, Poncho Ponchito Sanchez was introduced to his new housemates. Besides Art, the other occupants of this house included, his sister (the before mentioned female JRT), an older Black Labrador, a big grey cat, and a family of two adults and three teenaged boys. This was a full house and Poncho was suddenly the center of attention. It did not take him long to figure out this was where he definitely wanted to be.

Over time, Poncho learned many new things: Do his business outside, steal all the toys from the other dogs, chase the cat without getting scratched, herd the teenagers, swim with the old Labrador, outrace the other JRT, ride shotgun in the car, and snag a hotdog on the run from a plate too low.

Poncho refused, however, to play fetch. He figured it was beneath his status to do such a ridiculous thing.

***

Art was working as an office manager and technician for an internet company.  Poncho stayed with Art during the day in the office and greeted customers.  He still had an over exuberance with what he considered to be “rodents” which included small pocket dogs such as Chihuahuas, Pekinese, Pomeranians, etc.  While the owners would hold their precious pooches as high as they could, Poncho was fast and jumped quickly, he sometimes would land with tufts of fur in his teeth. Art stayed alert to anyone who came in with their tiny dogs and tried to keep Poncho at bay. However, Poncho seemed to know the difference between adult and baby “rodents” and was extremely gentle with tiny puppies……go figure.

One customer had a small Dachshund and the first time Art went to his house to install internet equipment Poncho jumped out of the truck before he could catch him and streaked directly at her. Art was terrified that Poncho intended to hurt this poor little dog and tried to stop him, but he was too fast.  Amazingly, Poncho screeched to a halt just short of his target and instead of nipping, he sniffed her and wagged his tail.  It turned out this Dachshund was elderly and blind. Poncho was very gentle with her, and she seemed to like him too. On subsequent visits, they would play together until time to go.

When Art had to go out into the field to repair or install equipment, it became an adventure! Some of the equipment was located on towers that stood out in remote fields, and while Art was doing his job, Poncho was digging furiously for the ever-evasive gopher.

In one particular field, there was a tower with a glitchy piece of equipment that Art had to take care of often.  In that field lived a large, gentle, Clydesdale horse named Comet, who Poncho immediately tried to herd.  Comet tolerated this tiny, barking thing nipping at his heels and then began to play.  It became a ritual of stomping the ground while Poncho ran wildly around him barking, then with a quick whip of his head, Comet would roll Poncho over with his nose. Which would of course ensue more frantic barking and nipping until finally exhausted, Poncho would lay down in the shade next to the water trough and Comet would saunter over, take a long drink and dribble all over Poncho’s head.  They became best friends.

***

When Poncho would meet new people or animals, he seemed to make a conscious decision that he loved them, liked them, or barely tolerated them and inexplicably stuck to that decision. One dog he never liked was a long legged female boxer named Roxy.  She belonged to Angelica, a friend of Arts whom Poncho did not seem to care for either. One day, Angelica brought Roxy over to meet Poncho. She was a big, floppy, rambunctious puppy at the time and Poncho refused to play with her and completely ignored her.

Art took Poncho with him for visits at Angelica’s place hoping he would have a change of heart, but he never warmed up to Roxy or her owner. One evening Art drove up the driveway of Angelica’s house and walked up to the doorstep with Poncho following behind. Poncho stopped short when he realized where he was, turned around and began walking down the driveway past the truck toward the road. Art called to him, and he looked back over his shoulder as if to say, “If you don’t take me home now, I’m walking home myself.” Art never took Poncho back to Angelica’s again.

***

Poncho had just turned six years old, and one evening while watching T.V., he was in his usual spot on Arts lap when Art noticed Poncho’s belly seemed unusually taught, and when he began to rub it, Poncho winced in pain. The next morning Art took him to the veterinarian. After an exam and much blood work, the veterinarian told him it was cancer of the lymph nodes. He would not survive it for long. Art was stunned.

Art brought Poncho home with the medicine the doctor had prescribed and once a week took him back for more blood tests and chemotherapy. He hoped beyond hope Poncho would at least survive the year.  The whole family tried to help Poncho continue his routine, but the deterioration was apparent.  He lost weight, lost all interest in play, and slept more often than not.  The medications worked less and less until Poncho was in too much pain to allow.  Exactly six weeks after the diagnosis of cancer, Art took Poncho to the vet, and reluctantly, made the decision to him put to sleep. Those last moments were excruciating for Art. He held Poncho close and told him he was the best dog ever. As he slowly slipped away, Poncho licked Art’s hand and looked up into his eyes as if to say, “You were the best friend ever.” ♥♣

 

 

 

 

Written March 2013 / 550 words



Saturday, June 6, 2020

88 Words

So the challenge is; create a mini story from only 88 words, no more, no less. Here's what I came up with....


Reflecting and imagining, I look into the mirror. Eyes too small, a bulbous nose, lips, and (ugh) ear flaps! What were those creatures called? Humans, yes, humans of Earth. How ugly they were. But even then they seemed so fragile, so helpless in their ignorance.

I turn from the hapless image then back again. There I am, the true me. Large black eyes, non-existent ears, small chin, large round head... I am considered beautiful by my peers.

My heart breaks though for those poor extinct creatures of Earth.

Tuesday, February 11, 2020

Tuesday, September 27, 2016

Karma in the Mirror by Teri Saya

I sit in front of the mirror, applying age defying makeup,
covering my Mother's laugh and worry lines.
I see parts of her in me, the way I remembered her.
She had a beautiful, crooked smile, dark hair, and alabaster skin.
Her blue eyes and cheekbones reflect mine in the mirror.
Although, I am not as beautiful as she was.

But, in remembering, guilt and shame raises its ugly head.
I remember how self-centered I was,
And how I treated her when she would call me from her tiny apartment 450 miles away.
She was desperately lonely and wanted to talk to her eldest daughter.
She wanted to know how my life was going, if all was well, how the grandchildren were.
I would answer with small, vague words.
Then, I half listened to her telling me about what had been happening in her life.
The phone on my shoulder, my hands busy making lunch, dressing the baby, or doing the dishes.
I would lower the volume on the TV, but still watch it while she spoke.
I only noticed when there was a sudden silence on the other end.
"You’re not listening to me, are you.”
This I hear loud and clear.
"Well of course I am Mom."
She calls me on it. "Ok, what did I just tell you?"
"Uuhm." is all I can say. I am embarrassed and put out a small chuckle.
"I’m sorry Mom, I'm just a little distracted at the moment."
I can hear the disappointment in her voice.
 "Ok, I'll let you go. Maybe I'll call you later....or you could call me?" she asks hopefully.
"I love you Mom, I'll call you later."
"I love you too honey, I'll talk to you later, goodbye."
Her voiced has lost its strength.

Tears well up and smudge my freshly applied mascara.
I had taken my sweet time calling her back.
My sister calls two weeks later to tell me Mom is in the hospital.
Her Emphysema had taken its toll.

My Mother has been with God fifteen years now.
I had avoided the love she tried to pour out to me,
The love I had taken for granted during my adult life.

I step away from the mirror and pick up my phone.
I call one of my sons.
“Hi Mom, I gotta call you back. Someone just came to the door.”
I call my other son.
“Leave a message…beep!”
“Hey sweetie, I just called to see what you’re up to. I haven’t heard from you in a while.
You know my number, call me when you can, ok?”
I call my third son.
His mailbox is full and I cannot leave a message.
I call my fourth son.
His phone has been disconnected.
I e-mail and Facebook all four of my sons.
No response.

I picture my Mom nodding her head with a sad little smile.

I make excuses, as a Mother will.
“But they are all very busy with their lives”…… I begin.

Then I glance in the mirror once more…..hello karma.


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Tuesday, March 15, 2016

Observation, Creating a Story or an Article from the Odd Things you Notice



This sign is posted at our local La Estancia Park just down the street from us.The dog looks like one of those from the Disney movie "101 Dalmations" and I'm not sure what's in his mouth...an eraser? Anyway, it basically reads;

"Your dog forgets nothing,
it is you who forgets
your responsibility
to collect their excrement."
From the Board settlers

It is a very nice park with lots of trash cans and most neighbors pay attention to this sign.

Below is a short article I wrote a while back about this very subject.

Baggie Blooms
by Teri Saya

If you walk through a lot of the neighborhood parks here in Guadalajara, you will notice that the trees and bushes are blooming baggies. The first time I noticed this was when my husband and I were exploring our new neighborhood, and while strolling along a path in a beautiful park, I noticed odd-looking blooms on some of the trees and bushes. Upon closer examination, the blooms turned out to be small, plastic baggies tied into the branches all along the trail. How very odd, I thought. Maybe it's an artistic statement? We had never encountered this in the states. We were both clueless until we decided to get a puppy.

Not only am I a Gringa in Mexico, but I am also learning how to live in the city. I was born and raised in the country, and in my adult life; I always stuck to rural living in California. I have always had a dog or three in my life, and whenever we went for walks, it would be off leash, through the forest or along the beach. I always taught my dogs not to do their business on a trail or walkway. They knew to go in the bushes or high grass where it would go unnoticed and eventually, washed away by rain. If we were anywhere near an asphalt road, I made sure they were leashed. This is actually a law in the states. You never know when a dog might see a cat or squirrel across the road and dart out into what little traffic there might be….So, I knew these basic, rural etiquettes for walking dogs.

The etiquette for city-walking your dog is so very different. We have now learned how to walk our Schnauzer on a short leash while maneuvering the obstacle course of people, skateboards, bicycles, motorcycles, buses, cars, and street drains. Pretty much, anywhere you look, anyone can walk. Thus, the beauty of the baggie blooms and abundance of trash bins. We have even added our own blooms upon leaving the park.

How often do you walk out of the door with your pet forgetting the poop bags? Head for the nearest neighborhood park, the shrubbery is in bloom!


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